Wow, nice writing technique, i can really get in thir heads. you might want to work on dialogue though. other than that, you can possibly get this published. :D
AWW, NO PICTURES?????!!!!!???
I'm old.
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I don't publish my stuff, and my Dialouge wasn't heavy in this chapter I was foucusing on characteristics.
Werd! very weird!
Yay?
I read it.
yay?
What
The
Fuck
Indeed.
Thanks for the Birthday wishes!
You're welcome Sarai.
FrozenSheep
Summarize please.
Reaperyami
Shit Happens.